i don't know what is going on here and i wrote it

7/4/86                         Title

1.  Both poems are about murder or dead people the poem called Nobody Knows how She... doe’s not look like a poem but Contusion doe’s. The poem Nobody Knows how She... is writern in a coded message. IN Nobody Knows how She there is no foul play but in Contusion the person sounds as if he/she was shot

2. I think the most effective is the poem named Contusion Becuase it looks more like a poem then Nobody Knows how she... But you can see what had sort of happended in Nobody Knows how She... like her one shoe and her notebook and a dress and the body floating.

3. BODY FOUND IN RIVER

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A body has been found IN a river the body is of an unknown identification. The person had been dead for at least an hour the death of the person is unknow She had only one show and a dress on and a notebook was aleast one yard from her.

4. (This was written as if it was on a scrap of paper)

Well, I have had

 enough I have

decided to kill me

 self because of

my debts and

problems don’t go in

to a full report

well good bye

Yours

Arthur brown

5. people like to stress there feelings That is why they write about murder and death.

6. Unfinished work again

Adult (poem)

Adult (poem)

Unfinished

A lot of work is missing Robert

an Adolescent (diary entry)

An Adolescent (diary entry)

 

Wed June 18^th 1986

Came home from school, had tea and did homework.

It’s raining again so I’l stop in and play on my computer

10.30 Going to bed

11.30 can’t get to sleep so I will do some exersise’s to tire my self

11.35 told to stop make so much noise.

Thu June 19^th 1986

School was boring, say no more.

5.15 I have to stay in for causing trouble so I will play on the computer

5.30 Mam’s took the power supply from the computer so there is nothing to do.

7.31 found sex Pistols tape so I will play that. Then put some Sam Fox pictures on wall, waste time, then go to bed.

Fri June 20^th 1986

MY BIRTHDAY!

I got a ninja suit, computer games and other bits. Because it’s a good day I wont mention school. Went to a restaurant for my tea came home about 8.30 so went out side and Ste and I caused teenage anarchy till 9.30 came in watched a new Sepilburg film on pirate video then went to bed.

Sat june 21^st 1986

            Went to Waltons, a pet shop in Hartlepool with Ste. Then went to tropical fish fish house with Ste and my mam to spend birthday money on fish and acsesories for my girbill and hamster.

            Then came home at about 5.51 had tea the Ste and I went garden creeping for a mess about then came in and went to get my glaxey from the fridge and found it half eaten, you cant trust anybody.

Child. (a physical description)

12/03/86

Child. (a physical description)

A child sits staring at a small toy, it’s small eyes wide, it’s small ears listerning taking in the smallest noise. A child is aged from about 4 or 5 to 12. A child can walk now and has started school at 7 years of Age

            Bright colours, toys e.t.c fascinate little children. Just a toy moving will light up a little childs eyes and it will make it’s efforts to crawl over and explore this moving object with it’s mouth.

the four ages of man part 1

some quality material in this project!

12/3/86

The Four ages of Man

Child

Adlesent (young adult)

Middle age

Old Age

Included in the pieace of work will be 4 seperate sections all to do with one character each separate pieace of writing will be a(p)proached in a different way

1) a physical discrption

2) a poem

3) diary entry

4) how other people look at him.

violence

no i see why i pursued a career in the criminal justice system

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Violence

Violence is like a cocnut

Dark and hard to break

Or like a to weight falling

Very hard to stop

Some people use a broken bottle

Or for some a club

NiNJAs use Ninjachas, throwing star’s and scythe’s

For the Karate expert feet and hands will do

But what about the muggers who

Beatin and steel from you

Then make a way with £1.50

Leaving you scared for life

But for the U.S.A police it’s a

Common crime

Good

Duet

one of my first cracks at poetry

 20/2/86

Duet

I’ve got 10 pounds in my pocket

Well why don’t you buy a screeching rocket

I’d rather buy a Catherine wheel

Set it a light and it will be a squeal

But I might get a Sam Fox poster

Or for my mam a Philips toaster

But what a bought a spectrum game

Most of them are just the same

I know I might get a record or a single

Now why don’t you just make up your mind

There must be something I can find

I know you should put it in Yorkshire bank

And go and see a film from RANK

I hope it will build up in interest

Then there will be a bigger invest

This is the end of an advertising poem

the final chapter

remember - this is my mininovel

Chapter 5.

Stocking the aqarium

            In An Aqarium 24x15x12 you should try to have:

6 Live bearers (these fish give birth to live swiming babies at the time).

6 Barbus Species (any less and they may fight other fish)

6 NeoNs

4 Rasbora Species

2 Gourmi (sexed if possible)

1 male Fighter

4 Small angles (these can grow very big).

2 Catfish – corydoras.

1 Algae eater or Loach

A selection of Live bearers. (all community)

Sailfin mollies

Mollies

Guppies

mosqito platys

Sword/tails

Mosquito Fish

Egglayer (all community)

Zebradanio

Scissor tail

Harlequins

Whitecloud mountain minnows

Barbs

Peardanio

Cat Fish (all community)

Corydoras Julii

Pepeard corydoras

bronze corydoras

algae eaters or Loachs (all community)

Sukin loach

Khuli Loach

THE END

Interesting – but is this really a novel?

it's all about the pox baby

Chapter 4

Fish diseses

Finrot

These very obvious Symptoms appear on poor fishes bad water, being attack by other fish. Low temperatures bring this harmfull disese.

White Spot

Small white spot cover the fish’s fins and body and if the fish is not treated it will spread the disese on to other fish and die.

Skin Flukes

            The parasites burrow into the fish’s skin and stay near the surface. Fish with this disese lose there colour and become helpless.

Eye Infections

            The eyes cloud over Becuase of fungus and stickout.

Fungus

            Fungus attacks fish that have split finsor damaged Bodys. It Affects fish if they are changed from totally different water’s.

Pox

            White spots Join together to form large white patches. Faulty diet and lack of Vitamins are sometimes a cause for this disease.

All of these diseses Should be cured, and it is always best to treat the whole tank in case some spread.

the fish keeping mininovel 3

Chapter 3

Anatomy of A Fish

(Diagram)

Dorsal Fin

The dorsdal fin is on the top of the fish some fish can be differeet from others by Dorsal fin

(Diagram)

Adipose Fin

Some fish do not have this fin

(Diagram)

Caudal Fin

(Diagram)

Anal Fin

Only male livebearers do not have one of these

(Diagram)

Ventral fin (paired

(diagram)

Pectoral Fin

 

Swim Bladder.  All fish have this because it enables a fish to swim upright and Straight. When a baby fish is born It swims to the top to Get a Gulp of air to fill it’s swim bladder and that is when the female turns and eat’s it young.

the fish keeping mininovel 2

I'm starting to think i might have copied some of this from a real book

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Chapter 2

Decoration is a must for a tank like gravel or sand and plants rocks stones e.t.c. but some metals must not be put in a tank like copper e.t.c.

            If you are keeping tropical fish you will also need a heater and a tank must be kept at about 74oF to 80oF or  oC to  oC

Here is a conversion table

oF 32	40	50	60	65	70	75	80	85	90	100	212
oC 0	4.4	10	15.5	18.3	21.1	23.8	26.6	29.4	32.2	37.8	100 Boiling

You must not over crowd a tank with too many fish! Because some may not get food, there is not much room for them to swim and they may fight.

Feeding fish must be feed. They can be fed with flaked food or freeze dried tubleFlex or daphnia. You can also buy live food like blood worm, daphnia, tubleflex.

            You can get your own daphnia sometimes from a pond or grown your own whiteworm.

Plant’s

(Diagram)

(A) Egeriadensa: (B) HairGrass: (C) Nitella (D) Potamogeton crispus: (E) Heteranthra.

(Diagram)

(F) Hygrophila (G) Herpestis (H) Willow moss (I) Cryptocoryne (J) Aponogetan crispun.

the fish keeping mininovel 1

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Chapter 1

            Keeping fish has been a hobby for years because of its wide selection. and good fish tank also looks good as well. In this mininovel it will introduced you to an interesting new hobby.

TANKS Tanks can be all glass or have a metal frame. The glass is stuck together with silicone sealer.

(Diagram)

HOODS a hooh has a light fiting in to light the tank they can come in different shapes and sizes to fit the tank.

(Diagram)

Filteration: a tank must be kept clean because all the dirt Falls to the bottom and becomes bad. So it must be kept clean and how. with filters.

Undergravel filters. Are under the gravel and two tubes come out of them and air is Pumped down the tubes but comes back up and causes the dirt to be pulled down.

(Diagram)

untitled 2 looks like a lazy day

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Write a profile on Wolf and how he thought (profile)

I didn’t!

Obsession

9/12/85

Obsession

There is was again. As soon as my concentration lapsed that same picture formed in my mind. The picture of the House, our House blowing up. I had to do something, and fast!.

            I did not know how to explain because our dad had some friends in and I would have to explain how I found out and besides kno no one would belive me.

            So I shouted my dad to come upstairs and told him he just said “Don’t be daft” and whent back down stairs. I cleared my mind once more and his thoughts came into my mind. This Time He was came over to our house and put something in our window and ran. So I ran down our stairs and told my mam dad and sister and visitors to run out the house and the house about 20secs or our leaving the House blew up.

Who could be thinking such thoughts? Who could be so obsessed with this image. I saw the way he walked, moved and from a distance so I called him Fox. He looked so innocent and normal but I bet he was probably mad.

Untitled 1 - note my first critique!

remember, the italics are the teachers notes

13/11/85

Title

It was a Thursday night, it was Very dark on The Moors. I could here the squelching of moss and owls Hooting when I heard a snaping I looked round and saw a dark figure with a sword. I grabed my sword and stood watching, waiting knowing that soon I might die. I brought my sword out of its sheath. The figure grew closer I looked round there was know where to hide or run to. I had to fight this man.

            He came about three feet away from me. He swung his sword – it caught mt hand. I swung my sword. I missed I swung again and just caught his face, Then the swords clanged for about one minate. Then I fell to the ground. He swoped the sword round. I rolled, then he flung it. At me ? it landed about an inch away from my head. The I got up and plunged the sword in to his throught throat. He lay there. So I walked away.

A nice piece of writing

After the year 2000 A.D

Look, I invented email! (05/10/11)

9/9/85

The street alarm went, So I got up and went down stairs, I had my breakfast, Receved the mail from the computer and went out To school. Its the second last day for me in hear and soon I will be going to London.

I have found some pictures of the old schools and noticed how things had changed like desks and chairs and the building it’s self. Also school trips like to New york, Singapore e.t.c instead of crummy  Lightwater valley.

Friendship is ...

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Having A friend who you can trust, has a good sense of humer (SP), and could take a joke, some one who will lend you money as long As you pay back. (L)lets barx you borrow games and Books like Irish joke books and murder books and a good laugh.