Cruelty to Animals

12/5/86                       Cruelty to Animals

1. myxomatosis is an infectious fatel disease of rabbits caused by a virus.

2. the rabbit will be bumping into things and struggling to walk and move

3. the rabbit cannot see, and it’s muscles tense up and then after a few days it dies

4. the person killed the rabbit to put it out of its miseriy

5. I thinkm they should not use this method because it is a cruel way to kill it. If they should kill rabbits why not just trap and/or kill it with a gun.

6. “what are those funny things staring at us through the bars?”

“Hush dear. Its along story”

“Before you were born your father and Brother and myself lived in a warren a long way from here for many years when there was an out break of myxomatosis”

“whats my. Myxomatosisius”

            “myxomatosis is a deadly disease the farmers spread over all our warrens and we had to leave, buy unfortionatly your farther and brother died a few days later.” She went to the corner and sat down. “on our way to the moors I was caught in a trap that is the scar on my neck and was there for 2 days the a farmer came and put me in here”

            “well why am I here” her son said. “because you were born two weeks later so you have been here all your life”. “those funny things are humans just like the farmer”

            “we we will we ever get nout” he asked sadly “I don’t think so dear” the only cance of us geting out is if we are chose for the chop”.

how i see America

No date

My picture which is of Mx America (no picture was included)

connotations

23/4/86

Connotations are the different ideas or images or pictures which are conjured up in the mind Byeitherone word or a phrase

 

Northern Ireland                                 Just Say no

Pastures green                                    drugs

Terry wogan                                        Grange hill

ANarcHy                                              Zammo

I.R.A                                                     Heroin

No future                                             Smack

Religion                                               White lines

Upturned cars                                     money

Car bombs                                           Joints

SINN Fein                                             Death

poetry – poetic language

another fine comment at the end!

14/4/86           Poetry – poetic language
Paraphrase	Poem	Comments if paraphrase is better	comments if poem is better
1. froze the brooks and ponds	called to water “Halt!”	The words froze the brooks and ponds sounds better than called to water “Halt”
2. turned the thawing snow crisp again	crusted the moist snow with sparkling salt		the author use’s onomatopia like the crusted sounds like the noise it makes
3. Brooks ice over	Brooks, Their own bridges, stop	the brooks just is its own form
5. Fish	Tench		Tench is a particular fish
6. Move slowly	lurk		Lurk sounds interesting. Why?
7. beneath the frozen surface of the ponds	under gluey glass	Under gluey glass sounds like a sticky hard surface
9. lane	hard-rutted lane		hard-rutted lane has something to it
10. Icy puddles crack	breaks a brittle pane
11. trees	tinkling trees		the tinkling puts more in to it than just trees
12. bend under the	Changed into weeping willows	Is more concisie
13. stick up out of	Take root	More starling – dead things can’t take root
14. frost makes patterns	Fearsome windows shoot their ghostly friends	Fits in better with other parts of the poem
15. frost	Fierce frost		Is more startiling
16. traps	Interns	Is more vivid than interns
17. covers trees	Ranks trees in an armed host	Covers trees is concise
18. makes icicles	Hangs daggers	More concise
19. decorates windows	Ferny ambush weaves		Expressed in a better way
20. warmth	In the long war grown warmer		Is more dramatic
21. soon melts all the ice away	Will strike him dead and strip his armour	Is more precise
Quite good Robert – I’m concerned that you seem to have missed out a lot of work though. Take care with presentation

i don't know what is going on here and i wrote it

7/4/86                         Title

1.  Both poems are about murder or dead people the poem called Nobody Knows how She... doe’s not look like a poem but Contusion doe’s. The poem Nobody Knows how She... is writern in a coded message. IN Nobody Knows how She there is no foul play but in Contusion the person sounds as if he/she was shot

2. I think the most effective is the poem named Contusion Becuase it looks more like a poem then Nobody Knows how she... But you can see what had sort of happended in Nobody Knows how She... like her one shoe and her notebook and a dress and the body floating.

3. BODY FOUND IN RIVER

See next page for details

A body has been found IN a river the body is of an unknown identification. The person had been dead for at least an hour the death of the person is unknow She had only one show and a dress on and a notebook was aleast one yard from her.

4. (This was written as if it was on a scrap of paper)

Well, I have had

 enough I have

decided to kill me

 self because of

my debts and

problems don’t go in

to a full report

well good bye

Yours

Arthur brown

5. people like to stress there feelings That is why they write about murder and death.

6. Unfinished work again

Adult (poem)

Adult (poem)

Unfinished

A lot of work is missing Robert

an Adolescent (diary entry)

An Adolescent (diary entry)

 

Wed June 18^th 1986

Came home from school, had tea and did homework.

It’s raining again so I’l stop in and play on my computer

10.30 Going to bed

11.30 can’t get to sleep so I will do some exersise’s to tire my self

11.35 told to stop make so much noise.

Thu June 19^th 1986

School was boring, say no more.

5.15 I have to stay in for causing trouble so I will play on the computer

5.30 Mam’s took the power supply from the computer so there is nothing to do.

7.31 found sex Pistols tape so I will play that. Then put some Sam Fox pictures on wall, waste time, then go to bed.

Fri June 20^th 1986

MY BIRTHDAY!

I got a ninja suit, computer games and other bits. Because it’s a good day I wont mention school. Went to a restaurant for my tea came home about 8.30 so went out side and Ste and I caused teenage anarchy till 9.30 came in watched a new Sepilburg film on pirate video then went to bed.

Sat june 21^st 1986

            Went to Waltons, a pet shop in Hartlepool with Ste. Then went to tropical fish fish house with Ste and my mam to spend birthday money on fish and acsesories for my girbill and hamster.

            Then came home at about 5.51 had tea the Ste and I went garden creeping for a mess about then came in and went to get my glaxey from the fridge and found it half eaten, you cant trust anybody.

Child. (a physical description)

12/03/86

Child. (a physical description)

A child sits staring at a small toy, it’s small eyes wide, it’s small ears listerning taking in the smallest noise. A child is aged from about 4 or 5 to 12. A child can walk now and has started school at 7 years of Age

            Bright colours, toys e.t.c fascinate little children. Just a toy moving will light up a little childs eyes and it will make it’s efforts to crawl over and explore this moving object with it’s mouth.

the four ages of man part 1

some quality material in this project!

12/3/86

The Four ages of Man

Child

Adlesent (young adult)

Middle age

Old Age

Included in the pieace of work will be 4 seperate sections all to do with one character each separate pieace of writing will be a(p)proached in a different way

1) a physical discrption

2) a poem

3) diary entry

4) how other people look at him.

violence

no i see why i pursued a career in the criminal justice system

Undated

Violence

Violence is like a cocnut

Dark and hard to break

Or like a to weight falling

Very hard to stop

Some people use a broken bottle

Or for some a club

NiNJAs use Ninjachas, throwing star’s and scythe’s

For the Karate expert feet and hands will do

But what about the muggers who

Beatin and steel from you

Then make a way with £1.50

Leaving you scared for life

But for the U.S.A police it’s a

Common crime

Good

Duet

one of my first cracks at poetry

 20/2/86

Duet

I’ve got 10 pounds in my pocket

Well why don’t you buy a screeching rocket

I’d rather buy a Catherine wheel

Set it a light and it will be a squeal

But I might get a Sam Fox poster

Or for my mam a Philips toaster

But what a bought a spectrum game

Most of them are just the same

I know I might get a record or a single

Now why don’t you just make up your mind

There must be something I can find

I know you should put it in Yorkshire bank

And go and see a film from RANK

I hope it will build up in interest

Then there will be a bigger invest

This is the end of an advertising poem

the final chapter

remember - this is my mininovel

Chapter 5.

Stocking the aqarium

            In An Aqarium 24x15x12 you should try to have:

6 Live bearers (these fish give birth to live swiming babies at the time).

6 Barbus Species (any less and they may fight other fish)

6 NeoNs

4 Rasbora Species

2 Gourmi (sexed if possible)

1 male Fighter

4 Small angles (these can grow very big).

2 Catfish – corydoras.

1 Algae eater or Loach

A selection of Live bearers. (all community)

Sailfin mollies

Mollies

Guppies

mosqito platys

Sword/tails

Mosquito Fish

Egglayer (all community)

Zebradanio

Scissor tail

Harlequins

Whitecloud mountain minnows

Barbs

Peardanio

Cat Fish (all community)

Corydoras Julii

Pepeard corydoras

bronze corydoras

algae eaters or Loachs (all community)

Sukin loach

Khuli Loach

THE END

Interesting – but is this really a novel?

it's all about the pox baby

Chapter 4

Fish diseses

Finrot

These very obvious Symptoms appear on poor fishes bad water, being attack by other fish. Low temperatures bring this harmfull disese.

White Spot

Small white spot cover the fish’s fins and body and if the fish is not treated it will spread the disese on to other fish and die.

Skin Flukes

            The parasites burrow into the fish’s skin and stay near the surface. Fish with this disese lose there colour and become helpless.

Eye Infections

            The eyes cloud over Becuase of fungus and stickout.

Fungus

            Fungus attacks fish that have split finsor damaged Bodys. It Affects fish if they are changed from totally different water’s.

Pox

            White spots Join together to form large white patches. Faulty diet and lack of Vitamins are sometimes a cause for this disease.

All of these diseses Should be cured, and it is always best to treat the whole tank in case some spread.

the fish keeping mininovel 3

Chapter 3

Anatomy of A Fish

(Diagram)

Dorsal Fin

The dorsdal fin is on the top of the fish some fish can be differeet from others by Dorsal fin

(Diagram)

Adipose Fin

Some fish do not have this fin

(Diagram)

Caudal Fin

(Diagram)

Anal Fin

Only male livebearers do not have one of these

(Diagram)

Ventral fin (paired

(diagram)

Pectoral Fin

 

Swim Bladder.  All fish have this because it enables a fish to swim upright and Straight. When a baby fish is born It swims to the top to Get a Gulp of air to fill it’s swim bladder and that is when the female turns and eat’s it young.

the fish keeping mininovel 2

I'm starting to think i might have copied some of this from a real book

Undated

Chapter 2

Decoration is a must for a tank like gravel or sand and plants rocks stones e.t.c. but some metals must not be put in a tank like copper e.t.c.

            If you are keeping tropical fish you will also need a heater and a tank must be kept at about 74oF to 80oF or  oC to  oC

Here is a conversion table

oF 32	40	50	60	65	70	75	80	85	90	100	212
oC 0	4.4	10	15.5	18.3	21.1	23.8	26.6	29.4	32.2	37.8	100 Boiling

You must not over crowd a tank with too many fish! Because some may not get food, there is not much room for them to swim and they may fight.

Feeding fish must be feed. They can be fed with flaked food or freeze dried tubleFlex or daphnia. You can also buy live food like blood worm, daphnia, tubleflex.

            You can get your own daphnia sometimes from a pond or grown your own whiteworm.

Plant’s

(Diagram)

(A) Egeriadensa: (B) HairGrass: (C) Nitella (D) Potamogeton crispus: (E) Heteranthra.

(Diagram)

(F) Hygrophila (G) Herpestis (H) Willow moss (I) Cryptocoryne (J) Aponogetan crispun.