cruelty to animals

Undated

Cruelty to animals

Green peace

Cruelty to Animals

12/5/86                       Cruelty to Animals

1. myxomatosis is an infectious fatel disease of rabbits caused by a virus.

2. the rabbit will be bumping into things and struggling to walk and move

3. the rabbit cannot see, and it’s muscles tense up and then after a few days it dies

4. the person killed the rabbit to put it out of its miseriy

5. I thinkm they should not use this method because it is a cruel way to kill it. If they should kill rabbits why not just trap and/or kill it with a gun.

6. “what are those funny things staring at us through the bars?”

“Hush dear. Its along story”

“Before you were born your father and Brother and myself lived in a warren a long way from here for many years when there was an out break of myxomatosis”

“whats my. Myxomatosisius”

            “myxomatosis is a deadly disease the farmers spread over all our warrens and we had to leave, buy unfortionatly your farther and brother died a few days later.” She went to the corner and sat down. “on our way to the moors I was caught in a trap that is the scar on my neck and was there for 2 days the a farmer came and put me in here”

            “well why am I here” her son said. “because you were born two weeks later so you have been here all your life”. “those funny things are humans just like the farmer”

            “we we will we ever get nout” he asked sadly “I don’t think so dear” the only cance of us geting out is if we are chose for the chop”.

how i see America

No date

My picture which is of Mx America (no picture was included)

connotations

23/4/86

Connotations are the different ideas or images or pictures which are conjured up in the mind Byeitherone word or a phrase

 

Northern Ireland                                 Just Say no

Pastures green                                    drugs

Terry wogan                                        Grange hill

ANarcHy                                              Zammo

I.R.A                                                     Heroin

No future                                             Smack

Religion                                               White lines

Upturned cars                                     money

Car bombs                                           Joints

SINN Fein                                             Death

poetry – poetic language

another fine comment at the end!

14/4/86           Poetry – poetic language
Paraphrase	Poem	Comments if paraphrase is better	comments if poem is better
1. froze the brooks and ponds	called to water “Halt!”	The words froze the brooks and ponds sounds better than called to water “Halt”
2. turned the thawing snow crisp again	crusted the moist snow with sparkling salt		the author use’s onomatopia like the crusted sounds like the noise it makes
3. Brooks ice over	Brooks, Their own bridges, stop	the brooks just is its own form
5. Fish	Tench		Tench is a particular fish
6. Move slowly	lurk		Lurk sounds interesting. Why?
7. beneath the frozen surface of the ponds	under gluey glass	Under gluey glass sounds like a sticky hard surface
9. lane	hard-rutted lane		hard-rutted lane has something to it
10. Icy puddles crack	breaks a brittle pane
11. trees	tinkling trees		the tinkling puts more in to it than just trees
12. bend under the	Changed into weeping willows	Is more concisie
13. stick up out of	Take root	More starling – dead things can’t take root
14. frost makes patterns	Fearsome windows shoot their ghostly friends	Fits in better with other parts of the poem
15. frost	Fierce frost		Is more startiling
16. traps	Interns	Is more vivid than interns
17. covers trees	Ranks trees in an armed host	Covers trees is concise
18. makes icicles	Hangs daggers	More concise
19. decorates windows	Ferny ambush weaves		Expressed in a better way
20. warmth	In the long war grown warmer		Is more dramatic
21. soon melts all the ice away	Will strike him dead and strip his armour	Is more precise
Quite good Robert – I’m concerned that you seem to have missed out a lot of work though. Take care with presentation

i don't know what is going on here and i wrote it

7/4/86                         Title

1.  Both poems are about murder or dead people the poem called Nobody Knows how She... doe’s not look like a poem but Contusion doe’s. The poem Nobody Knows how She... is writern in a coded message. IN Nobody Knows how She there is no foul play but in Contusion the person sounds as if he/she was shot

2. I think the most effective is the poem named Contusion Becuase it looks more like a poem then Nobody Knows how she... But you can see what had sort of happended in Nobody Knows how She... like her one shoe and her notebook and a dress and the body floating.

3. BODY FOUND IN RIVER

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A body has been found IN a river the body is of an unknown identification. The person had been dead for at least an hour the death of the person is unknow She had only one show and a dress on and a notebook was aleast one yard from her.

4. (This was written as if it was on a scrap of paper)

Well, I have had

 enough I have

decided to kill me

 self because of

my debts and

problems don’t go in

to a full report

well good bye

Yours

Arthur brown

5. people like to stress there feelings That is why they write about murder and death.

6. Unfinished work again

Adult (poem)

Adult (poem)

Unfinished

A lot of work is missing Robert